My family are the most important people in my life. My family mean the world to me.They are the only ones I trust and need. Moreover,they are the ones who give me everything I need ,such as money , clothes ,food , and safety .I love my family ,because they love me for who I am , they understand my feelings and they have been always for me. In addition , they are the only people who will be by my side no matter what happens. My family are the reason of my smile and the first reason of my happiness . Whenever I have a problems they support me and help me to find the solutions. I can't imagine my life without my family ,because no one ever can replace them . I'm sure that every one may give up on me beyond my family. Finally ,I'm so thankful for having my family in my life.

We all need family. There are 3 commas that you should remove though. Can you find them?
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I think I must remove the comma before the two because, and before such as
ReplyDeleteCorrect. Well done! Final grade 79%
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