In the past, my first traveled was to the Lebanon with all of my family. When we arrived I was impressed because they have beautiful natural. The weather was the best in that time. Then we went to the hotel to eat dinner and sleep. In the morning, we went to the beach and rode the ship. I like it so much because we really had fun. After that in the afternoon, we went to the park and played many games. For example, my sister and I have been going to play the "horror house" and we were terrified. That time a saw some games that weren't in the UAE, but now we have many beautiful games. Then in the second day, some of the Lebanon families invited us to eat lunch with them. I went with my mother and some of my sisters. The foods were really delicious I liked them. Then after maybe 2 months we back to the UAE.
How old were you when you did this? It sounds like some time ago.
ReplyDeleteThis is good writing but you have 1 run-on. Can you fix it?
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I was 6 years old 😛. I corrected the mistake.
ReplyDeleteThe mistake was " the foods were really delicious. I liked them."
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