All family in the holiday prepare for a great trip, especially if the weather is cloudy and cold. However, they have many places to visit it for example: garden, mountain, desert and beach. I prefer the beach because I like the sea, boat and sunset on the beach but before we go should to prepare the equipment for a trip such as, carpet, chairs, umbrellas, food, drink and extra clothes. While we going to the beach, my father like to invite his friend family and he accept the invite, when we arrive the beach we organize our staff including barbecue tools, my father friend bring the ski dive to play with waves with his kids and his wife: they were a beautiful family and we have a lot of fun with them.
Finally, after we finished the barbecue with grill chicken we drink coca then we got back to car turned to the home with a lot of fun and we hope come back again.
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Well tried Eida, but you have 3 run-ons. Can you find them? Current grade 70%.
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