Dubai Mall is very big mall in Dubai. The location of the mall next to burj Khalifa it is strategic location for tourist. The area of Dubai Mall is 12 million square feet, it is huge area which is equivalent to an area of 50 foot ball fields. Also, the Mall contain 600 shops most of them new stores of global brands exist for the first time in the Middle East. Moreover, I like to visit Dubai Mall with my family to shopping and have dinner. There are some caffe shops, restaurants and shops for clothes I like it in Dubai Mall but the relaxing place in the mall I think is Aquarium and under water zoo it have a lot of kind of fish and sharks they got it from ocean. Finally, the Dubai Mall become a famous tourist place in the world, at every weekend millions of people visit it.
Nice description Eida, but two singular/plural errors and on pronoun error.
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Hi again. You found two errors so your score is now 76%. The other error is the "it" in line 6
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