Saturday, November 23, 2013

Elevator (Fatima)


Elevator is a great invention. First, I will talk about elevator's history. Elish Otis invented the elevator in 1857, but the idea of the elevator came from the Ancient Egyptions. It was very simple, and it was working by the humen power. After that, Elish Otis tried many times to make a safe elevator. Finally, he achieved his dream, and he showed his elevator to the public in NewYork. People liked his elevator, and they built the first building with Elish's elevator was the Haughwout building. On the other hand, elevator helps us in variety ways nowadays. In fact, as you see, there are many elevators in our buildings such as hospitals, hotels and towers. Have you seen any building without elevator nowadays? Of course not. It's very useful for us in transfer patients, furniture and dairly to the high floors. So, elevator is Indispensable(indispensable), and they are trying to make it better and better.





3 comments:

  1. Well written Fatima, but there is a capital letter that should be lower case (small).
    Grade is 90%

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  2. I found out the mistake
    Indispensable(indispensable)

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