National day
National day is the big events in the each country, specially in UAE. The government of country make celebration to insert happiness in the people's hearts. However, all people in that country sharing the joy. For example, most of them designed and colored their cars, also most of people are going to lift the flag of the country on their houses. Schools, universities, markets, and governments are sharing the joy with people. The schools and universities make celebrations for students. Moreover, all markets sell products which are for national day, such as flags, pictures, and decorations that have the color of the flag. In national day, the families sharing the happiness with neighbors and friends. They make national party for family gathering, or friends gathering. All people were happy in that event, because they were born in that country, or lived in that country for several years, or listening some pretty things about that country.
Should be fun! As for your writing, there is 1 run on and one comma you need to remove. Can you find them? Grade = 80%
ReplyDeletefirst mistake: For example, most of them designed and colored their cars and most of people are going to lift the flag of the country on their houses.
ReplyDeletesecond mistake: Moreover, all markets sell products which are for national day such as flags, pictures, and decorations that have the color of the flag.
Well done! Final grade 86%
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