The city of water
There are many attractive cities in the world. Venice is one of these cities, which locates in Italy. Most people visit it for entertaining and relaxing. Venice has a lot of buildings which (buildings, which) are surrounded by water from each side. These buildings are connected between each other by bridges, so people can move easily. Furthermore, there are no streets or cars in this city, people depend on boats only to transport from one place to other. Indeed, Some ( some ) artists visit Venice to draw the beautiful landscapes in the city. Also, photographers like to take pictures for the way of how people live there. In addition, some tourists like to hang out in Venice to enjoy its pure weather and its restaurants. Breathing a pure air helps people to feel fresh and more comfortable. So, if you want to visit a calm and wonderful place, Venice will be the best choice.

Nice city and well written but there is 1 run-on and one misused capital. Grade is 80%
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