Monday, January 20, 2014
Friends (Maha)
I have many friends that I meet them in many places such as school, university and other places. However, there is a difference between a friend to another friend. That means some of them are using name of friendship for their own businesses without care about their friend. After, they achieve their businesses they will leave their friend without explaining their reasons. So, they make their friend feel sad and victim ,but it is good because he learns lessons about how to choose good friends. However, I have a friend her name is Mariam and she is the best friend that I know her in my life. I have known her since I was in school. I think Mariam is a good friend because she is honest and kind with me. Also, she cares about me by calling and asking about me such as, how I did well in my study and other things. Moreover, I like her character because she understand me and we have some share traits between us. I hope my friendship with her to stay along time.
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Hi Maha,
ReplyDeletegood try. 3 errors - 1 tense in a conditional, 2 SVA and 3 Tense.
Try to fix them. Current grade=70%
Tense is "I know her all my life" - should be I have known her all my life.
ReplyDeleteSVA - she understand me - she understands me