Sunday, January 19, 2014

My best friend : Mona

Mona is my best friend. She has been my friend since I was in a junior high school. She married in August 23.13, and she's pregnant now. I tell her every-things that were happened in my life. We shared our happiness and sadness. And she encourages me if I dropped in problem However, she study with me in Zayed university, and we decided to finish our education together. Our passions are different, but there are a few passions which are similar. Such as, photographing, reading novels, and watching Korean series. Furthermore, Mona and I like to do new experience, also we like adventuring. I hope that this friendship lasts forever
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3 comments:

  1. ZurobJanuary 19, 2014 at 8:44 PM

    Hi Sara, this is good but there are two errors - one is a verb that needs cutting (passive not needed) and the other is SVA.
    Can you find them? Current grade-=80%

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  2. UnknownJanuary 20, 2014 at 2:55 AM

    First mistake : She has married since August 23.13.
    Second mistake : I tell her every-things that happens in my life.

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  3. ZurobJanuary 21, 2014 at 8:45 PM

    Good try but the errors were : were happened - cut the were; and she study - should be she studies

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