Free time is the best time for people to do their hobbies due to they feel happy when they do their hobbies. In my free time I like to read several books whereas, I don't have a lot of books in my library. In addition, I like to write since I was 15 years old nevertheless, I don't write every day. However, by brother prefer playing football as much as playing video games. For instance, he divides his free time to play football with his friends or playing play station online with his friends around the world, so that will make him addicted to video games. On the other hand, my sister likes to do shopping in her free time, she feels happy when she goes to the mall. Moreover, she likes to dance a lot. Due to dancing and doing a lot of exercises she loses her weight. I think, all people like to do several things in free time, it makes them feel happy and comfortable.
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