Education is very important in our life for many reason. The first one is when you get higher education you will have a good position and better rank in the community. In addition, to earn a good money.
The second one is when you are educated will all people respect you. Moreover, most of them trust you and they depend upon you in their decision.
Thirdly, economically if you are well educated and have good qualification you can apply for any job and get it although you don't have experience.
Finally, not only you can get a good job, but also you can get a higher salary to improve your life.
However if you are not well educated you will face many difficulties in your life specially when you find a job because many employers look for certificates, experience and qualifications.
Well written but there are 2 errors here. The first is a fragment made with a connector and the second is a run on because the connector needs a full stop before it and a comma after it.
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you found one - moreover, but the other one is still a fragment - you need a subject and verb with it. 83%
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