My best friend's name Mariam. I have known her since I was grade three. She is an amazing girl. She is not just a friend only she is my sister also. Mariam is very funny girl. She hates studying, but she tries hard to be successful because I always trying to advise her. She adores thing called Starbucks in a negative way.I always call her korya because her eye and hair look like Korean people. She gets angry when I call her that name. The best thing that I love in her personality is that she always helps and supports me when I make mistakes and stands with me when I need her .I hope we stay together forever. 
Good try Nawal, but there are 5 errors here. The first is when you use passive but it should be active, the second and third are when you use a form of the verb "be" but shouldn't and the fourth is tense. The last one is SVA. Can you fix them?
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Good try Nawal. Only one left and that is "Always trying" should be "Always try".
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