Sunday, January 19, 2014

My best friend (Fatima)

Fatima has been my best friend since I was 16 years old. She loves her family and she always talks about them. Fatima is very special to me because she knows everything in my life. In addition, she always understands me and help me when I need help. She has several hobbies such as handcraft and writing poems. Last year she gave me a bracelet, which was made by her. I liked this bracelet and I decided to keep it with me forever. Fatima is very sensitive girl, she doesn't like people who talk about her in bad way. She becomes very angry when she knows if someone talks about her in bad way. I hope that she will stay my best friend forever.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Reem, there are 4 errors in this piece of writing - 2 SVA, one tense that should be present perfect and one missing verb (passive).
    Can you fix them? Current grade= 60%

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  2. Well done- grade now 60+12 = 72%

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