Five years ago, I met a special friend when I was in grade 10. Her name is Ashga which means adore or deep love. Even though we were in different classes in both grade 11 and 12, we were always communicating with each other. At that time, there was a girl who suddenly wanted to make a relationship with her. In contrast, I did not prevent my friend from that. Although, I began to notice that she started to be far away from me more and more. After that, I talked to her and she knew everything, but the other girl did not want her to be with me. Next, one month passed without walking with her during breaks and without chatting because we didn't have the chance. I felt upset at that time and cried many times. Then, we graduated from the school without saying "see you next time" as always. After that, she got married in the summer and I went to her marriage to make her feel better. After she got married, our relationship continued and became stronger, unlike that girl.
Well written Aljaleela - there is one error - a verb that needs cutting. Can you find it? Current grade = 90%
ReplyDeleteI edited it and corrected what I thought was wrong. I hope that I got it right.
ReplyDeleteGood now. 93% final grade
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