Saturday, January 18, 2014

Sara (Fatima)

Sara has been my best friend since I was a child. She always works hard to get high grades. She wants to be a successful person in every field of her life. Sara is 19 years old. She has two brothers and two sisters. She is the biggest girl in her family. She adores pizza, sweets and pasta. I always laugh when I sit with her because she has sense of humer. Moreover, Sara usually tries to be graceful because she is kind of overweight. Last year, she graduated from high school, and she invited me to her party. It was very exciting to see her with graduation clothes. Recently, she is studying in ZU, and she is popular because she is helpful and kind. I hope she will be my friend forever.

Fatima Ahmed Nasser

                          

3 comments:

  1. Well written Fatima. Only one error - a choice of tense. Can you find it and fix it?
    Current grade=90%

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  2. when i set (sit) with her

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  3. No- that's just spelling- the error was "Recently, she is studying" - should be "Recently, she has been studying"

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