On those days, children's brains are open more than past. Because in those days every thing which child wants is easy to get. Children's families are not care from negative ways of what are going to happen if they give their children every thing. Children's families should put limit for the wishes of their children. They should give them useful things that could help them to be successful in their life. Children's families should teaching their children how to spend their free time in positive and useful way. For instance, the could teaching them " drawing on the canvas, swimming and doing exercise, playing football, ridding a horse, and reading books ". That way is going to help children to be successful people in the future. However, children's families are going to be happy when they seeing their children growing up in the right way. Also, the children will know how to manage their life in future.

Good advice Sara. 2 errors in gerunds and infinitives - 80%. Can you find the errors?
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Delete1- For instance, they could teach them " drawing on the canvas, swimming and doing exercise, playing football, ridding a horse, and reading books ".
2- However, children's families are going to be happy when they see their children growing up in the right way.
Well done Sara. You found the errors. +6%
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