Sunday, December 1, 2013
Saudi Arabia
Last year I traveled with my family to my hometown Saudi Arabia by car. We spend 3 hours from our home to the borders of Saudi Arabia. On the other hand,we were excited because we will see our relatives in Makkah. Furthermore, we spend one day and a half to arrive to Makkah. It was difficult not only but also we were tired because of the long distance from the border to Makkah. When we arrived and see my grandmother, grandfather, aunts and uncles I forget all fatigue. We had a delicious dinner with them. After that we went to the grand mosque which is the largest mosque in the world to do Umrah. I felt comfortable and reassuring when I enter. After many hours we went back to home to sleep. moreover, every day we have visitors from our relatives, I don't remember some of them because I was child. However, they know me. We spend there one month. As well as, I hope to travel this year because I miss all of them.
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There's one connector error here but you've only used 4 connectors. I asked for 7. Your grade is less because of that. Current grade 60% - only 3 connectors used well.
ReplyDeleteHi Khuloud,
ReplyDeleteThere is one error in punctuation and one error in grammar with a connector. Current grade 80%